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Surpriseeeeeeeeee!!! Christmas surprise, I'm posting Half Breed new page
This is a touching page, hope you like it^_^ Feel free to comment of critique, please^_^
HALF BREED created by Mirella Menciassi
Please, feel free to leave a critique for help me to do better
Please, feel free to leave a critique for help me to do better
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Overall Vision Originality
Technique ImpactIt is AMAZING!
I can't wait for the next page.
Your technique is amazing and your chosen colours fit really well. The story is original and good, and I can't help but wonder what happens to poor Isuzu and Rikka.
And now for the critique.
The shading isn't bad as such but it could be better. You can in some places see a lighter part where the darkest of the shading should be, the smooth brush you used wasn't used close enough to the edges of the lines. I also find them a bit too dark and different to the fur colour, like a bright light on a highly reflecting surface (which fur is NOT).
It's just personal opinion, but I think it would look better with sharp shading like classic comics.
And Isuzu's eyes in the last panel really freak me out.