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WIND OF CHANGE

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First illustration with Ironclaw Racha and Runningwolf Mirari after change :dance:
Hope you like it^^ I know that I'm not good in digital painter for background, so please, leave me a critique for help me to improve, if you can :)
Little Mirari has a walk with her father. They walk through a field. Racha feels something changing in the wind.

Prima illustrazione di Racha e Mirari:dance:
Spero vi piaccia, so che faccio pena con la colorazione digitale degli sfondi, se mi lasciate suggerimenti per migliorare, sono ben accetti :)
Una giovanissima Mirari fa una passeggiata per i campi con suo padre. Racha fiuta il vento, sentendo che qualcosa sta per cambiare...
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I don't write critiques often, so please bare with me!!

Firstly, what bugged me is the neck of the wolf, on the right side of it (or left? whichever side is closer to the green hill) to be correct. Even though fur continues down to the legs, the neck is a bit thinner than it should be. The position of the front paw which is up (left one?) seems a bit too puffed on the elbow, but your anatomy skills are amazing!!
The little wold is very nice but even though it is a matter of distance, the back legs are too small or the front legs are too big. A pup isn't very big at all and the difference wouldn't be so big. (:
I really LOVE the background, and since I am terrible at backgrounds, I can't give you any feedback on it at all, except of: it is awesome!!
This is an awesome piece of art, your anatomy skills are stunning, keep up the great work!!